Hi Abdul,
 
I've worked up the first part of the document to give you a guide as to what needs to be updated in both the first marked-up and second non-marked up parts before I will accept a document for syntax checking. I've attached my mark-up so far, just download it and rename it to .zip to unzip it.
 
These tags apply to the marked-up section of the assignment:
 
1) [***CITATION]: I've attached the Harvard reference document. Anything in text is a citation, a pointer to the complete reference in the references section. Like the SKU barcode in your assignment, a citation uniquely identifies a reference and needs to follow the Harvard syntax, which is (Surname, Date). All the rules are described in the attached documentation. The reference section contains information sources cited directly in the text only. The Bibliography section contains references to source materials not cited directly in the text. Both the References Section and the Bibliography use the Harvard syntax to describe each resource. This syntax can also be found on the cheat sheet.
 
2) [***ACRONYM]: When supplying an acronym, allways supply the expanded version of the acronym when using the acronym for the first time in the document. Thereafter, use the acronym.
 
3) [***QUOTATION]: A direct quote must be surrounded by quotation marks.
 
4) [**AMBIGUOUS]: Sentences where meaning could not be determined for the purposes of grammar correction.
 
These apply to the entire assignment:
 
1) Apply the correct styles to all text. Most paragraphs need to have Text 1, Justified applied. You can see where I've stopped syntax checking, that the structure of the paragraph is lost when edits are done.
 
2) Do a dedicated sentence by sentence rework of the assignment to fix things like sentences appearing in point format, as they were first entered into the document, and that haven't been worked into a formal sentence yet. I've done a lot of this in my reworked first part of the assingment, you can follow what I mean by filtering change tracking to see my updates only. I'll get the ones you miss, do what you can.
 
3) Remove capitals that appear in mid-sentence, if they are not pro-nouns. If you are unsure of wether to capitalise or not, leave it capitalised and I will correct it in the syntax check. Things that should be capitalised are proper nouns only: i.e. names of people, organisations, countries, brands, etc.
 
I've spoken to Jo to let her know it needs more hours, and please phone me at any time on my cell if you need answers.
 
Regards,
Peter.